Brillance in song form

I want to post the brilliant song I wrote yesterday about recent events:

Recently I've been sick and tired
Can't seem to understand how so many can complain
And carry on about their stupid choices
And failed attempts at the normalcy they crave

When did my friends
Go back to high school?
Isn't this the reason I grew up at all?
To leave the trite
And broken logic
Of those failed four years left long ago

I pride myself on my sense of reason
And my ability to say what's on my mind
Though I admit that I too am guilty
Of falling flat when opportunities arise

Since when was fiction
The new standard?
And everyone stopped being honest with themselves
Can't count the times
I've been let down
Left with the scurf of a problem that's not mine

Things left unsaid another night
Though given ample time to reveal what's going on
Sorry excuses, and disappointment
Another tired problem left to surmise

When did my friends
Go back to high school?
Isn't this the reason I grew up at all?
To leave the trite
And broken logic
Of those failed four years left long ago

I want it to be Mixtapes-esque and I have an idea for how the melody should go but I need Matto to help me write it. Mall said he was also going to write a Mixtapes-esque song, and Matto has an intro song and another new one to teach at some point. Wow. We already have six songs practiced and Mall said yesterday "デモ作ろうか？" which was infinitely exciting. 初ライブ here we come!!!